business card crit
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- warheros2
throw me some feedback if ya got the time, yo.
word.
- armed_rob0
hmm... show the card.
- fresnobob0
I'm not into the Bell Gothic
- tehgee0
hmm i kinda like that 1st one eve though im not really sure what that shape is... not crazy about the type... the cmyk makes me tink youre like a print rep...
- agentfour0
all the type is too big. Kinda cheapens it all. Also the logo is massive
- warheros20
the shape is the result of intersecting circles that make my initials.
i chose those colors because they were 'print' colors? i didnt want arbitrary colors i guess, and i wanted it to stand out. that is also why the logo is big, so you remember it.
- clerk0
i'd work more on the type, do it more readable, unless you want a more chaotic communication that is.
- tehgee0
onoooooooooooo
- armed_rob0
I dont dig them - sorry!
1. I dont dig the CMYK thing at all. Too printing firm like.
2. Font choice/spacing is a bit strange.
3. Why do you use a yahoo mail account then you got your own domain?
When this is said I need to say that I like your site alot... Why dont you use some graphics like that on your card and then make it your graphic identity...
But you know its your card and as long as you dig it... its cool!
- toe_knee0
is not very professional
- build0
Range the type rather than having it centred would help straight away.
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- warheros20
thanks for the comments!
i agree with you guys that the type is a big chatoric, although i do like it. but there is a concern for the viewer i guess, besides me.
i never use my domain email, ive used yahoo since 8th grade, haha. would look better though for the card i guess, eh?
i was thinking of doing something similar to my site, but i was also thinking of just putting together a new site.
anyways, ill probably do three more tomorrow as well, with all of these comments in mind.
- edvc_van0
That logo looks like a fetus. it's like an ultrasound in cmyk.
Not crazy about the type either.
- dddc0
disgusting
- leftwave0
the logo on #1 and #2 reminds me of the old T&C surf logo (yin/yang).
this is not a good thing. the 3rd one might be cool if you just use the black circles and lose the colored ones. maybe turn the small black circle into a white letter "p" and "h" for your name...?as for your email, if you love your yahoo email account, put a forwarder on your "professional" one. just a thought.
- warheros20
hahaha, fetus.
- warheros20
nice idea, leftwave. i actually have an all black circles one, but not with initials in the circles.
- edvc_van0
It's true!! isn't it? It really looks like a fetus!
- save0
There's too many point sizez and weights. Simplify it and maybe move away from caps. Also, having a different email to your url, looks a bit odd.
Apart from the CMYK?? theme, whats the logo about? Why not do something similar to a proff sheet if thats the approach you want, just a thought ...
- leftwave0
haha, yeah! you should sell this to some OB/GYN office!