business card crit
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- edvc_van0
who knows...he might also have a part-time job at a clinic doing ultrasounds.
- edvc_van0
I say, sell the first logo to some clinic, and stick to the last one for the card.
- warheros20
how does one find a doctor to sell a logo to?
- leftwave0
red X
try uploading the image!
- edvc_van0
just send emails to all the clinics in your town saying you have kick-ass logo for them
- edvc_van0
much better
one thing.....it looks like the type is leaning towards the left. It's like if it's not centered. I don't know why.
Try switching the word "web" for "photography"
- tehgee0
type still needs massaging
- warheros20
like what, tehgee?
- edvc_van0
Oops....I mean, it looks like it's leaning towards the right! (not left) It might be because of the word "photography"
- save0
Typography, Print, Web, Photography.
Why do you have 'Typography' listed?
- tehgee0
im gonna call and tell you :P
- leftwave0
tell what?
- tehgee0
rule is not centered between paul hanger and graphic designer
y is not lined up with r
spacing isnt consistant visually between typography/print/web/photo
also space under type/web /etc isnt same as sppace under email addy
- tehgee0
the ph now makes me think of soap bubbles :P like ph ballanced
- clerk0
hmm, typography you say?