site crit
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- jaybee0
iìll check that out man.
tks
- jaybee0
c'mon guys let's get this thread to at least 50.
:-P
- imakedesign0
overall pretty nice work. however a few small things.
- spell things right. e.g xtras
- transitions way to long.
- logo text is unreadable.
- fonts are blurry in places
- the white square bounce is a bit 'in my face'
- preloader % is to small.
- i want to view your work larger.
- sureshot0
noise work..but I am at 1024 RES. here at work... and some of the images in the gallery section are cut off at the top.
and I agree with the mos... the flower transitions take WAY to long.
other than that good job
- kerus0
im going to chime in with the same response.. takes way too long to get where you're trying to get to...... looks nice otherwise!
- jaybee0
i'll sort that out.
tks
- kerus0
if youre using it to buffer / preload a little visual confirmation goes a long way :)
- jaybee0
no it's not a preloader man, just the entrance anim.
- ********0
for me, the plant imagery is at odds with the stark stock photo realism of you with the chair. It feels like if there is additional imagery it could be more illustrational and the tendrils of leaves could crawl over it