Logo Critique 5000
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- rasko40
I dont mean to say, draw a bulldozer on there or anything, but maybe just a change of typeface, those are a little too consumery, so I think 'suntan lotion' or something. To be honest, bearing function and brief in mind rather than pure aesthetic, I am more drawn to the 'blob' on 1 but I would make the shape a more dynamic shape more akin to a guitar plectrum, and maybe choose a san serif font that is quite humanist without being too consumery.
- vburo0
put a bulldozer on it.
- vburo0
..and a hardhat.
- brandelec0
bulldozers look ugly, put a tonka
- brandelec0
a tonka driving into the sun
- haverhill0
were you being facetious?
nick
(Mar 9 05, 14:04)
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Is that like felatio only with face cream? If so no.
- tomkat0
V
- hello_dolly0
nick is obsessed with the nike logo.
//he is sooo original and talented
plus he gave me felatio, now THAT he is good at
- nick0
i like the blob in #1, but it reminds me of sun lotion...
the type on #5 works best.. not sure i'm feeling the degree symbol.
rasko, im curious, why a humanist typeface?
- 2cents0
definitely needs more hard hat... you should speak with Polarunion.
- snuggles0
I would try it in DIN or Benton Sans, something a bit more masculine, but not too heavy...
- rasko40
nick: I just think that with the blob tweaked as I see it, a nice strong but humanist typeface would maintain the contemporary feel he has come up with, while holding enough authority to be deemed 'reliable' enough for a construction firm, rather than the rather feminine consumer font he is currently using.
- snuggles0
OMG, they've already done your wordmark...
- rasko40
" I prefer Sunbathers mottled like dalmations" for a company name.
- snuggles0
Studio A:
It should just be around this corner..
- cloned0
sometimes you've just got to start over like what happened to me yesterday
that's if you care hat all these people say
but yes without onstruction in the text i would think it is a poorly named tanning company
- radar0
i DON'T KNOW IT'S A TOSS UP BETWEEN "Fluffy White Clouds" & "Hurricane Force Construction"
- snuggles0
ahahaha!!
- cloned0
also, sunspots are cooler areas on the suns surface, therefore darker in comparison
though typically construction machines are yellow which is probably why you chose that color
- raelou0
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