Logo Critique 5000
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- radar
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Logo I am doing probono for a friend.I am leaning towards one or two I think, but both still need development. 1 & 5 are pretty much the same just different font and secondary treatment.
Any comments or suggestions are appreciated.
- fawn0
i like #5
the whole thing reminds me of something to do with dogs though...
- jarredbishop0
i like 5.
- snuggles0
#1
- brandelec0
i likey #3, may be with more 'ray' so it looks like the corner of the sun, may be?
- blackspade0
strangely enough, i quite like the big yellow blob one
- ian000
#1. definately
- ian000
Overall, the type treatment is nice but the marks are a little lacking.
- radar0
I can see that fawn you mean like a paw print I guess on 2 or 3?
- lenusiya0
i like 5, but I like the secondary version better in 1 if you choose #5
#3 is interesting too but I like #5 more... it's nice and clean
- tny0
1, 2, 3, 4, 5 (in order of pref)
- fawn0
yup radar!
- sherman0
ONE
- rasko40
aside from blindly going "I like 1, I like 2"... I cant help but think that none of these say 'construction' to me, I can see what you are getting at with 5 but it's not quite hitting it. I would play with a mix of one and five and I would also rework the word 'construction' underneath as you have blatantly chosen the simplest option.
But then, this is work for nothing so I wouldn't spend much time on it.
I think you have some nice looking solutions, just not for this project.
- snuggles0
the problem is none of them really say 'construction' or 'sunspot', yet I know how difficult contractors/construction logos can be, so good luck with that :)
- nick0
needs more hard hat
- haverhill0
#1 visually, but none represent the construction aspect of it. But fuck. What IS a Nike swoosh anyways.
Go for it.
- radar0
I hear ya Rasko - the name doesn't lend itself to the average blocky/3D construction logo that are usually initials or something.
1 & 5 are my original concepts, but I agree if I took the word construction away - you would have no idea what it was.
- grayhood0
i like two for that "i just looked directly into the sun and now have three dots burned into my vision" sort of feel but i agree it does not say much about construction.
- nick0
"But fuck. What IS a Nike swoosh anyways."
were you being facetious?
- tim5250
i would agree with rasko. none of these say construction to me. look at the mark(s) by themselves. do they say, 'construction', or 'sunspot'? not sure what the blobs represent, but they don't say construction or sunspot to me personally.