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- abizzyman
http://www.arcademedia.net/vivif…
lots of stuff missing.. blah blah... this is just the core of the site.
I'd like a 'zow' third color here.. but they've got their hearts set on a monotone b&w site core. The images splash it up though.
your thoughts?
- Soler0
Looks like it fits the demo
- ********0
to flashy for me. but its ok i guess. i had no problems. found the loading kinda slow i know its how its suppose to be its not a glitch but still...but yeah..no problems using firefox 0.9 here.
- BonSeff0
looks great man, dont like the beeps and click noises tho
- tny0
looks great...
- lvl_130
looks nice overall. like the functionallity of the sound toolbar. clean transitions. nice imagery.
some comments:
the space between the nav is kind of weird to me. not really sure why..the white text on the black box is really hard to read (i also have my monitor res at 2048x1536 so that may be why : )
this month feature vehicle link could maybe have the gray bar like nav
- instantok0
i think the main nav type could be a little weightier...the type hierarchy overall could be more pronounced as well...since the color is very monotone the type being all very similar flattens the whole thing out
the site might pop more the way you want if the background was a flat, lighter grey (no tiled logo) and you add like a 10px white border to the content area
also...the "this month's featured vehicle" competes with every content section imho...i think you could condense the main nav and bump that feature below it, on top of the other two features...it could make the composition a bit more balanced...then you could move the header type over to line up with the body copy, the slight difference bugs me a bit
ha, i guess that seems like a lot of stuff...nice work nonetheless
- b_magallanes0
Just needs a button to mute the sounds....
- rasko40
the site isn't my thing but I think its probably great for the market, it works really sweet and is quick too.
they really NEED to get some better shots done, I mean, a lot of them are badly out of focus and terribly lit.. Anybody could do a better job I'm not even talking a pro photographer.. And the reflections I think need toning down, they look a bit garish and badly rendered
- abizzyman0
great comments...
... still in progression - thanks for the words, folks.