site crit

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  • instantok0

    i think the main nav type could be a little weightier...the type hierarchy overall could be more pronounced as well...since the color is very monotone the type being all very similar flattens the whole thing out

    the site might pop more the way you want if the background was a flat, lighter grey (no tiled logo) and you add like a 10px white border to the content area

    also...the "this month's featured vehicle" competes with every content section imho...i think you could condense the main nav and bump that feature below it, on top of the other two features...it could make the composition a bit more balanced...then you could move the header type over to line up with the body copy, the slight difference bugs me a bit

    ha, i guess that seems like a lot of stuff...nice work nonetheless

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