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- Dancer0
Also on the about Kim page I would align the photo (of kim) with the type above perhaps.
Agree with Jevad, everything is really well considered apart from the type that laods up. It seems really flat and the leading is too tight. Perhaps think about using a colour...?
I dunno...
this si the only criticism I can see
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- aaakpth0
i love tim burton!
- steadyvibe0
HAHA—they're not related!
- steadyvibe0
can someone test this on a PC for me?
- Jesk3150
Haven't read the other threads yet...
Looks good. I seem to be stuck on the pictures though. They look like great photos, but they are not poping as they should. The text on the pages does not interfear with the photo, so it almost looks incomplete. Like it started fading in but never finished. Maybe I'm expecting some white somewhere.
Other then that, looks very polished! Good job!
- Gorbie0
looks great on me mac using safari... you know that .00001% of the market share.
good job!
- steadyvibe0
yes, i have been testing it on that .000001% as well. I need someone to test it on a pc!
- fresnobob0
The bold words are pointless. The purpose of seperating words by making some bold and some not is for emphasis. The way they are being used does not take into account the heirarchy created by using a bolder face. For example, "Kim" is bold and "Burton" is not. In most cultures, the last name is the mre important, and thus should be the bold. by "Kim" being bold, you are highlighting the less important first name, and thus screwing up the heirarchy. You need to look at this and decide what should be bold and what should not. Go study some early New Wave design to see some great examples of hw this technique is used effectively.
- Nairn0
Looks lovely and your image usage in the body works very well... however, Jev and others are right - the main text has just been dropped on top with no thought and, personally, I would use a complementary colour instead of just black. Get some flow or columns in or something...
I don't understand why you've used jpgs for your buttons - the compression degradation stands out a mile!
The only other thing is that I would only use the sage lead motif once on each page...
These are minor points though - just make the text more interesting and enticing and you'll have a sublimely lovely site. Well done!
* tested on a shitty Dell PC - works ok (site, not computer that is)
- blindpilot0
ditto the jpg buttons
another very minor point is that in some cases when you roll over a button adjacent to a highlighted one, there is a gap between the orange and the orange, on others there is not - a smal point, but if you were to re-export the images as gifs, i would just alter that, but then i am a pedant when it comes to things like that
as for the overall site - i like it: colours, images, everything seems very comfortable together
nice
:)
- blindpilot0
oh yeah, and the image in the couselling/consulting page doesn't quite line up with the border image pieces
- canuck0
very nice. You've obviously put a lot of thought into the concept, look feel etc. Only minor complants are the ones already mentioned. good job