Logo Crit
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- Mark|Instil
New Design Company Logo,
Which style do you like best?
also any ideas gor a better tag line?
Thanks
- Mark|Instil0
oh and do you like or not and why?
forgot that bit, Thanks
- Soler0
They are all the same right? Just some in boxes and some iw/ tags, so not really able to pick a "style" that is better.
I would work on the text a little more. The s-t looks pretty funky. But it has a feel, you're close.
And creative design company is a little weird- design company or creative, but both is strange.
just trying to help. Nice job though......
- brooke0
I like this very much. I do not like the logo with the copy underneath, but you're still going to have to somehow communicate something about what your company does. (Perhaps you need a new typeface?) Otherwise, I love how you've written "Instil." It's lovely.
- blaw0
i like it.
without the box is more appealling to me.
funny though, i was going to say use 'creative design' and lose the 'company'.
- e-wo0
bottom right red one
- Mark|Instil0
good feedback guys, keep it comin, any ideas for what the tag line should be as it looks like thats wot needs changing most and potential fonts for it would be appreciated too :)
- yott0
very cool.
i would change the text. 3 words is good but instead of company (which is kind of stating the obvious) i would put another descriptive word. also, i'm not sure you have to choose between the version with the box and without, having a negative version might turn out to be useful.
also you might want to have a few colors for different types of works like web, print etc. if you wanna look big you might want to consider that.
the only thing i'm not sure about is another graphic symbol on the right or something... but i'm really not sure about that, the logo is pretty strong and distinctive.
- dstlb0
Like the logotype but yeah - the s & t are a bit sketchy. Work on them and it'll be great.
Hate the words below it - the font, the words, everything! Lose them.
Middle right is the one for me.
- johndiggity0
Break after the "n" and after the "s" and it will clean it up, and maintain a consistency. They are all pretty much the same, so it's your company, pick your favorite color, do a B&W, and keep a reversed out one like somebody arleady said. Try to contrast it with a blocky face below, and don't just plop it centered, maybe right justified. I would say just use "creative", so you can bump it up enough that the instil doesn't over power it, becuase the proportions are bad with the copy you have below it currently.
- Mark|Instil0
update after a few text tests , what you think now? gave it a bit of breathing space. THanks
- TResudek0
Bottom right
- ********0
i like the top right version out of all of these.
- blastofv0
Very nice logotype: it's got a definite style and personality, but it retains legibility. I say skip the 'creative design' bit all together.
There will be very few applications of the logotype where that text will be legible (I'd imagine anyway), so why not make the main mark the final logo, and that's that? When you need to incorporate a tagline/description, do so, but it doesn't need to be a permanent part of the design.
Just my opinion... nice work.
- ********0
the top left one: "creative design" is too vertically small. the letter "e" is starting to become too illegible.
the bottom left one: "creative design" looks too similar to the Charcoal typeface. ie. too recognizable
the bottom left one: "creative design company" is too light and plain looking. would loose clarity at small sizes
that's why I like the top right one.
- ********0
I agree with "blastofv"
- Mark|Instil0
Thanks alot, great feedback , yeah thats the plan im just tryna find something that will work underneath like that for the letterheads and things like that.
- Mark|Instil0
mostly it will be used on its own with out the accompanying text
- Soler0
The "s" still bugs me, but it's your call obviously.
Creative Design is a weird tag.
If it was Instill Creative, that implies more than just design which is good. And you clould make the text bigger so it is legible at all sizes.
Oh, and bottom right.
- uan0
like the first one...white on red... would turn it 90° CCW and brand with it.