Crit my poster!
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- TNDAP0
The illo kind of reflects the band the type is clean cause the music is slow not aggressive, but the band members are punk looking hence the rough illo, thanks for the comments.
- phist0
i like it.
- puter0
yawn..it's okay but looks like a Photoshop cutout filter or stamp that took a total of 2 minutes to make.
Don't get all jaded- just my opinion- I am from Philly- seen the band a bunch and personally think the image doesn't really match up- looks rushed.
Good luck anyway.
- TNDAP0
WHich one?
http://www.gigposters.com/design…
- DavidFelt0
Love it!
The colour is really nice and simple and the text is really classy.
Nice work
- stewart0
nice color and image
but the typography doesn't fit to the image.
it is too classy indeed.
- jg_20
agree.
but... which kind of music do they play?
- phatlee0
not enough info.....image looks a bit rough and grungy, very 90s and very American. Fine though if thats what the musics like
- stewart0
punk on violins
- jg_20
hehehee
- TNDAP0
It's like slow art noise if that helps.
- blaw0
beautiful.
- oliveira0
The illustration and colors ain't quite my cup of tea, but i'll criticize something else.
As you've said, their name is Bardo Pond. However, that name in the poster itself isn't the text with the most emphasys, and it should.
If I had no idea about what the name of the band would be, I'd say it was "The Khyber", because the typography for it is clearer and really calls up on the viewer.
You should think about what people look at first before moving on.
- TNDAP0
thanks
- brooke0
I always review with an open mind, & I honestly really don't like looking at it. The combination of styles between the image & the copy just really isn't working, & neither are the colors. Just my opinion, no big deal. Good luck to you!
- brooke0
I take it back, the colors are okay, now that I've looked at it twice. Maybe it's just that I really dislike the imagery.
- TNDAP0
Like I said before thanks for the constructive criticism,.alas there is no more working on the image, because the client approved and it's off and runnin', I can't imagine how a image is pompous and I don't personally agree with using flash for print, again thanks.
- jg_20
slow art noise?
whats that? electronic music? rock? .......
- r_gaberz0
the black area on the lower left ends a bit too abrupt compared to the right side.
- _salisae_0
much agreed Soler. The poster could be really something if you would clean up the illustration some more. Clean it up sucker! Your lines, as they are, aren't confident - kind of shaky. Looks like you streamlined a photograph. Make it intentional.
good work. i like the eyes!!