Crit my poster!
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- TNDAP
We designed a poster for a band in phila called Bardo Pond who will be performing at the Khyber...crits, comments, questions, concerns.
http://www.gigposters.com/poster…
- DavidFelt0
Love it!
The colour is really nice and simple and the text is really classy.
Nice work
- stewart0
nice color and image
but the typography doesn't fit to the image.
it is too classy indeed.
- jg_20
agree.
but... which kind of music do they play?
- phatlee0
not enough info.....image looks a bit rough and grungy, very 90s and very American. Fine though if thats what the musics like
- stewart0
punk on violins
- jg_20
hehehee
- TNDAP0
It's like slow art noise if that helps.
- blaw0
beautiful.
- jg_20
slow art noise?
whats that? electronic music? rock? .......
- r_gaberz0
the black area on the lower left ends a bit too abrupt compared to the right side.
- Soler0
could be a lot more detail in teh illustration to match the typography
- TNDAP0
Soler, you think the type is detailed I thought it was pretty simple.
They make rock...I guess my, my partner got this gig so I never heard the dudes, I know he doesn't care for their music, he's the on that described it as slow art noise, but you aint gotta like it to design and get paid right!?!
Thanks for the comments.
- the-saint0
I like the contrast in image and type, tthink it makes it interesting.
agree about the black ending straight on one side though.
- Ohood0
kinda looks like a book cover to me.
which doesn't really help any, but i do like it quite alot. nice work.
- TNDAP0
thanks
- _salisae_0
much agreed Soler. The poster could be really something if you would clean up the illustration some more. Clean it up sucker! Your lines, as they are, aren't confident - kind of shaky. Looks like you streamlined a photograph. Make it intentional.
good work. i like the eyes!!
- TNDAP0
The illo kind of reflects the band the type is clean cause the music is slow not aggressive, but the band members are punk looking hence the rough illo, thanks for the comments.
- phist0
i like it.
- puter0
yawn..it's okay but looks like a Photoshop cutout filter or stamp that took a total of 2 minutes to make.
Don't get all jaded- just my opinion- I am from Philly- seen the band a bunch and personally think the image doesn't really match up- looks rushed.
Good luck anyway.
- brooke0
I always review with an open mind, & I honestly really don't like looking at it. The combination of styles between the image & the copy just really isn't working, & neither are the colors. Just my opinion, no big deal. Good luck to you!