choose my logo
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- unknown0
i think 1 is excellent
- stimuli0
I'd choose something a bit more elegant, the fonts are a bit heavy and geometric. How about Melior? Dunno how it'd look but you could give it a try. Or if you keep the sans-serif you could modify the image to make it blend in?
- stimuli0
These books might help:
Marks of Excellence
Los Logos
Lingua Grafica
- unknown0
this my 1st logo in my life
i made all of them in one night
just for orientation...
i know that non of them are perfect :)
any logo,identify portfolios? :)
- ********0
didn't read the other posts, sorry if i repeat something...
- they dont really look like logos to me (except for #8).
- why the gray bg?
- font size seems too small.
- maybe figure out a way to separate the 3 words (different colors).
- butterfly idea is nice.
- ********0
Agreeing largely with Antonelli:
They aren't logos now. the are type that have been paired with graphic elements (that don't have any real symantic or syntactical relationship).
Remember some of the basic parameters to consider such as Should translate into one color and retain integrity, etc...
Back to the drawing board I think. always best to leave the computer behind. Design your logo, then use your friendly computer "tool" to implement it.
- ********0
if it was up to me...
- stewardes0
boomcrash,
I think you should try to keep it simple and clean. You shouldn't use all kinds of shapes, colors, etc. without a reason. If you have a good concept, the shape will come...
- unknown0
thanx all of you...
i think you helped me :)
see my logo tomorow :)
- k0na_an0k0
sometimes less is more.
just for shits and giggles try #17 by killing the background blue and grey and making the text and graphic either that shade of blue or grey. not both at once, either blue or gray.
there seems to be a lot going on in each logo. background colors, shapes, more colors, more shapes, movement.... they don't work well together as a whole.
hope this helps. good luck and can't wait to see round 2.
peace.
- unknown0
http://freefordesign.gol.ge/logo…
check them out
- sexypixel0
number 6, love it!!!
line up the two "F's" a bit better on the left hand side... it need the text with it tho, I dont think people will get it just like that
- autonoma0
BIG step in the right direction. Not sure you're there yet, but getting very close.
- chubba0
a LOT better than yesterday... a brilliant improvement. I like the colours used in 3....
6 is good, try making it bolder and more symbolic... joing the letters perhaps???
9 could be worked into more.. try giving it some curves, or make it a solid colour rather than a keyline??? and I'd delete 'design' and most of them too...
- fuckfascists0
im not fond of any of them :-
you need to work with black on white... worry about color when the form is perfected.
- unknown0
ok ok :)
will keep working...
but i like them now... :)
thank you all
- stewardes0
be carefull the shape doesn't get too complicated. I think '-esign' doesn't have any fuction. It got to abstract, so you shouldn't try to explain the whole thing. You chose for abstaction.
an improvement, but I think you're still not there... keep it simple!!
- Blofeldt0
I rather liked 17 of the first bunch. I agree with everyone else about the type. I don't like the new ones as logos. I recommendmaking them up on A4 as a letterhead and see what they look like with an address underneath them. Also considered what it will look like if you have it on a businerss card, will someone be able to read/understand it in a dingy pub/bar?