Newly finished package design

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  i don't feel that there is any hierarchy in the packaging. the type layout feels unfinished. the large logo is just too large. the colors are okay but could be slightly shifted as well as the photography. all in all, it feels flat. the barcode idea is nice, but does not need to be anywhere that large. the copy is more sloppy than clever. it doesn't make me want to buy it, and i certainly didn't get the reasoning behind growing it and giving it away...it's a good idea, but the process of it really doesn't make a whole lot of sense.

  sorry, that was all pretty negative :\

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  • thanks. I prefer critical to butt kiss.evanmade
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