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  • TaylorB0

    how about a few tweeks?
    1. the content text looks awkward caus it's larger than your nav text.
    2. also, the content text looks awkward caus it's left justified, but not lining up with the nav.
    3. Awesome illustration...but what is he painting? Maybe make the logo a little bigger and have him paint it.

    Here is a quick mockup with my suggested tweeks:

    cheers

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    • nice suggestion, works much betterdesigner4rent
    • just don't leave "enviroment" at the end like that. thats a type crime.akrokdesign
    • couldn't members be in the about section. sounds kinda cheap also. members. what, you need a members card. huh!?akrokdesign
    • yeah you do need a members card. but i love the comp thanks taylorB!!poopy_pants
    • welcome...TaylorB
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