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I like Kona's story better
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Scene: 7Setting:
*The room is dimmed with flickering florescent light. The neon light sign outside the fire escape flickers along. A woman with a cigarette laying on the bed gently blows her exhaled cigarette. As she inhales, the glowing amber of the cigarette cheery lights her face. Than the door bursts open with a dark shade of a man.Enter Kona
Kona: How now brown cow
Woman: You are late
*Kona walks toward the bed
Woman: Do you get the cash?
*Kona throws the cash on her belly
Kona: Here, this is what I have collected
*Woman does not flinch as the rolled up bills hit her
Woman: That seem a little more than what I asked for
Kona: They were carrying more than I expected
*Woman inhales her cigarette and talks as she exhales
Woman: You should of left them as they were
*Kona turns his back toward the woman
Kona: He didnt need it where he was going
Scene 8
Setting:
Kona and woman walking down a sketchy part of the town. She is wearing a short flaring dress that reveals her shoulders. She blond curly hair bounces as she agonizes her step in the high heels. The street is back lit with subtle glow around the couple. Sirens blaring in the background. Silhouette of people in the background but not around them. Kona seems to be leading her by holding her arm. She cant seem catch up with his wide stride.*Woman tries to pause as she takes out her cigarette and tries to light it.
*Kona flickers it away
Kona: We are late, we got no time for that
*Woman in a angry stare
Woman: Hey, I am the one who hired you
*Kona stops and holds the woman's arm tightly, she seems flimsy.
Kona: Either we do it my way or there is no way at all
*Woman stops staring and turns her head and notices her something in her expression
*Kona noticing this, turns his head toward where she is looking
Kona: What the...
Scene 10
Setting:
Kona and woman are back in the room. Kona is sitting by the dresser. The woman is in the bath room. The door is open and the light is flooding out.*Kona stares at an old bottle of whisky jigs his shoulders with pain.
*Kona takes his blood ridden shirt off and proceeds to open the bottle of old dusty bottle of whisky
*Woman in the bath room yells out
Woman: How did they know where we were going?
*Kona does not respond and continues to drink the whisky
*Woman's body can be seen in the reflection of the mirror. It is blurred dirty misshaped mirror.
*Woman peeks her head out to the room
Woman: did you hear me?
*Kona pauses with silence
Kona: Its not if they knew it or not. Its what are we gonna do next.
*Woman back in the bathroom starts talking
Woman: I am not even sure if you could do the job. This is getting more messed up.
*Woman walks out with a towel over her head naked toward the table near the tv, and lights up a cigarette. She pauses and looks a the flickering neon light.
*Woman crouches on a side chair curled up staring at Kona's back. Ashing her cigarette on floor.
Woman: does it hurt?
*Kona does not respond or looks back at her.