site crit please

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• jaylarson0

  leftwave,
  you have a good thing going here, but i do have some critiques.

  lose some of the top margin, i don't like to scroll.

  second, there are too many typefaces on the page. i count five. limited this to two, three at the absolute most, that is including the logo.

  third, i also agree, lose the italic down under.
  but another note, the color palatte is organized and subtle. try to tighten up the type a bit.

  after this, lets see it in action. i like the transparency of the reflection. that too i would like to see in action!

  good luck.

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