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That customer quote above the glasses looks forced into place. It would look better if you shortened the quote and made the text part of the graphic so it has a clean anti-aliased look.
I might rethink the serif font for the body text. Maybe leave the serif text just for the bold body title part and then go to a sans-serif font. Or at least bump up the line-height so its easier to read.
Definitely work some of the elements at the top into the footer area to keep a sense of visual unity and cohesiveness.
I think the picture of the person wearing the glasses is kind of distracting from the text. Maybe use that image in the top header?
Overall nice start, but i agree more attention to detail is needed. sorry i can't think of any good details though.
i like the logo you made.