Crit My Lunch
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- 74LEO0
my little german grandmum used to feed us this shit!
- CygnusZero40
There are too many cooks in the kitchen on this thing. We need to get all of our ducks in a row and peel back the onion here. Figure out what the end user experience is of this sandwich.
- MKD0
I think its a really bad photo.
Maybe you should take your work and what you eat more seriously. I dont know how many clients you will get with work like this.
- bjladams0
make the onion bigger
- dirtydesign0
nice concept.
execution is suffering a bit.
- meatball0
So thanks for sending this through. I talked this over with my wife who is very artistic and we agree that this sandwich layout is ok but feels blah. Nothing is really catching our eye. She suggested that you add more "pop". Can you turn this around by dinner time?
Thanks
- spot130
I like the symmetry of the meat-like topping and the onion adds just a touch of much needed color although clashes with your choice of plates.
- Miesfan0
That onion seems to be out of Cartman's ass. Incidentally, the mixture of language in the third person to first person is not consistent.
- qoob0
Your lunch is hosted on Wikipedia??
RIP!
- non0
Onion alignement is off.
- fooler0
This lunch is influenced by youth culture? You're seriously out of touch.
- monospaced0
Who the fuck disables right click?
- Iifeinvector0
Make the Muenster bigger.