Crit My Lunch 2828 Responses

Last post: 1 year, 2 months ago | Thread started: Mar 2, 12, 9:49 a.m.

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• stoplying

  Liverwurst with Muenster, mayo and red onions.
  

  

  DIRTY Sour Cream and Onion Chips
  

  

  and Water.

  Mar 2, 12, 9:49 a.m. – Permalink

• d_rek

  Living the high life, I see.

  

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  Dog-earMar 2, 12, 9:52 a.m. – Permalink

• dbloc

  There's something odd and fishy about all of this. The outdated sandwich design, the lack of garnish sense (regarding the separation of work between the two pieces of meat), coupled with the big-name chip brand... and the really out-out-place onion section.

  Are you really eating this?? Is this all self-initiated work? Everything seems inconsistent, even the quality of work from one sandwich to the next (the sandwich I'm mainly looking at).

  How are you so out of touch that you don't know what a top piece of bread is, yet you are eating a sandwich and chips. If you're sandwiches like this, you should be on top of what is going on culture-wise. You don't have to make sandwiches all the time, or even like it. But to not even KNOW how to do it is just odd.

  I just can't imagine these big clients asking you to design for them based on what I'm seeing from how you present yourself, your company, and your work.

  Something just isn't connecting here.

  • I call rip.– Continuity1/3

    lol– LOKi2/3

    lol– k_temp3/3

  

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  Dog-earMar 2, 12, 9:53 a.m. – Permalink

• moniker

  You must smell like heaven.

  

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  Dog-earMar 2, 12, 9:54 a.m. – Permalink

• qoob

  It is very 90's.

  

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  Dog-earMar 2, 12, 9:56 a.m. – Permalink

• Fax_Benson

  I'd say 1950s - cartoon lunch.

  That meat looks grim.

  

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  Dog-earMar 2, 12, 9:57 a.m. – Permalink

• see_thru

  Will be taking my daily walk to see the sandwich store hotty in t-minus 55 minutes...

  

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  Dog-earMar 2, 12, 9:58 a.m. – Permalink

• Fax_Benson

  You're the client and the designer, and it's STILL gone wrong. Take another look at the brief.

  

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  Dog-earMar 2, 12, 9:59 a.m. – Permalink

• dbloc

  

  • http://www.youtube.c…– non

  

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  Dog-earMar 2, 12, 10 a.m. – Permalink

• Iifeinvector

  Make the Muenster bigger.

  

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  Dog-earMar 2, 12, 10:03 a.m. – Permalink

• monospaced

  Who the fuck disables right click?

  

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  Dog-earMar 2, 12, 10:05 a.m. – Permalink

• fooler

  This lunch is influenced by youth culture? You're seriously out of touch.

  

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  Dog-earMar 2, 12, 10:06 a.m. – Permalink

• dbloc

  

  • is this for kids?– k_temp

  

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  Dog-earMar 2, 12, 10:14 a.m. – Permalink

• non

  Onion alignement is off.

  

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  Dog-earMar 2, 12, 10:18 a.m. – Permalink

• dbloc

  

  

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  Dog-earMar 2, 12, 10:24 a.m. – Permalink

• qoob

  Your lunch is hosted on Wikipedia??

  RIP!

  

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  Dog-earMar 2, 12, 10:26 a.m. – Permalink

• Miesfan

  That onion seems to be out of Cartman's ass. Incidentally, the mixture of language in the third person to first person is not consistent.

  

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  Dog-earMar 2, 12, 10:35 a.m. – Permalink

• spot13

  I like the symmetry of the meat-like topping and the onion adds just a touch of much needed color although clashes with your choice of plates.

  

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  Dog-earMar 2, 12, 10:38 a.m. – Permalink

• meatball

  So thanks for sending this through. I talked this over with my wife who is very artistic and we agree that this sandwich layout is ok but feels blah. Nothing is really catching our eye. She suggested that you add more "pop". Can you turn this around by dinner time?

  Thanks

  

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  Dog-earMar 2, 12, 11:07 a.m. – Permalink

• dirtydesign

  nice concept.
  execution is suffering a bit.

  

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  Dog-earMar 2, 12, 11:11 a.m. – Permalink

• bjladams

  make the onion bigger

  

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  Dog-earMar 2, 12, 11:16 a.m. – Permalink