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- sleepyfatso0
& looks a little out of place to me. Maybe move down a hint? Too small maybe. I think this works, but, I think the & could be better.
- version30
U = V
- iCanHasQBN0
Your V's are upside down.
Just kidding. I think it looks good. notch the T over to the left a hair? seems to be a lot of negative space between it and the R
- i disagreeProjectile
- me too disagreeESKEMA
- triple disagreemonospaced
- identity0
sleepy - ill try it for sure.
Version3 - great idea!
ICanHas - yeah, im seeing that now
Im also seeing maybe a bit too much space between the J-U in Julia... anyone else seeing this?
- airey0
excuse my ignorance but what's the font? i love those them 'R's.
- identity0
requiem
- identity0
- i prefer the 'U' rather than 'V' perosnally.airey
- it looqd better in my head :/version3
- yeah - mine too... it might be that im not giving enough space between the letterforms tho? ive seen it done well - im just not...identity
- pulling it off, or maybe the other letterforms won't allow it to happen - either way - im going to sleep on it, thanks guys!identity
- I'd keep the U's too, the v's make it a little too Romanesque for my eyes, but I don't know the industry either.BuddhaHat
- Likey the Latin version better, nice job identity.utopian
- Invalid0
doesn't work...
here's the thing. unless there is a reason behind getting rid of the cross bar on the A, it should be a uniform trait throughout your logotype. example... for some reason, when you have no cross bar on the A, it makes the cross bar on the H really jump out at me.
it's really subtle, but that's the type of subliminal visual metaphor that inteferes with how successful this is.
you'll notice a lot of logos that do the same thing with letter A, often don't have any other letters with crossbars in them.
- Good point - it was a question in my head - uniform cross-bar removal, but the H makes that difficult... thanks for the look!identity
- fryday0
Yeah i think i prefer it with the U's instead of the V's.. How about a version with the '&' bigger then the Julia and Arthur? instead of really tiny. Just a thought.
- robotron3k0
instead of two names, what about something like this:
o_O
- johndiggity0
if you have the display version, i think there is an alternate r that might work well before the ampersand. also with the crossbars removed, the apex of the a's might need to move left just a little.
- Ah! Good call - Im home now, but I know the r you're referring to, I'll give it a shot - thanks!identity
- nb0
If you're going to use the bar-less "A", you should flip it horizontally.
It's backwards.
- wha...?Invalid
- +1HomeCreative
- it's not.johndiggity
- Yes it is.
nb - it's correct the way it is, nb, wtf?monospaced
- scarabin0
- is this for real??iCanHasQBN
- of course! They take off the eyes on the morgue and put them on bags and throw them out just for fun...Mishga
- neverblink0
Your upside-down Vs are leaning to the right.
I agree that the crossbar on the H is kinda throwing your bar-less As off.
I would take the ampersand down a bit, so its middle is aligned with the crossbar on the H and R.- good point all - Ill work on this after my 9-5 today and post something back here later - thanks for the look!identity
- this is the main thing that stood out to me, though I thought it might have been the alcohol.duckseason
- ali0
Upsize the '&', flip sideways and make it look more like an infinity symbol...
- skt0
18 responses and nobody has asked him what it is for.
yeah, lets go with latin, it has symmetry, symmetry is cool. fuck the legibility, symmetry is the way forward.
me likey.
- *bites shoulderskt
- he was asking about the letterspacing/kernin... not a crit on the wordmarkDancer
- Amicus asked above...luckyorphan