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- d_rek0
It looks OK black on white, but i think you would notice the subtles of the spacial relationships if you reversed it out of black to fine tune the kerning.
All said it has a timeless elegance and sophistication.
- monospaced0
the RTH feels loose, and even the first A might be hanging out a hair
- why did you disagree with me about the RT being loose? GAWD.iCanHasQBN
- I disagreed about moving the T left, actually, GAWDmonospaced
- well, if you move the T left, it's relation to the R wouldn't be loose. KAWWW.iCanHasQBN
- janne760
reduce spacing between & and J about one and a half hair...
- laurus0
Reduce spacing between R & T and slightly more between T & H. Increase spacing between J & U a hair.
- identity0
- Beautiful.thatboyneave
- the & seems small for print,
very well balancedversion3 - "&" is still a bit smallutopian
- text is rather large compared to ampersandjanne76
- janne760
if in doubt, use Impact.
- SumWurk0
I like your logo as it was. Nice work!
- bulletfactory0
my personal preferences aside (and kerning suggestions as well) - don't let design by committee take over. You've tried pretty-much everything everyone suggested without defending your own initial design decisions. If you had explained yourself in the beginning, comments may have gone much differently and you wouldn't have wasted a bunch of time. Tell us what you did and why when asking for a critique (i admit i'm guilty of the same thing sometimes).
- oh, ive just tried some things suggested - and not others - Ill come to a conclusion im happy with, but I just wanted to get...identity
- some "fresh eyes" on this to see something that might be/no be there that I wasn't seeing. In the end, I'll go with what I feel...identity
- comfortable with, but I just wanted to comment on people's suggestions and tell them I appreciate their comments.identity
- baseline_shift0
move the L and I slightly closer together
- Dancer0
What neverblink said. A needs a redraw.... not an upside down V (if that's waht it is)
- skt0
18 responses and nobody has asked him what it is for.
yeah, lets go with latin, it has symmetry, symmetry is cool. fuck the legibility, symmetry is the way forward.
me likey.
- *bites shoulderskt
- he was asking about the letterspacing/kernin... not a crit on the wordmarkDancer
- Amicus asked above...luckyorphan
- ali0
Upsize the '&', flip sideways and make it look more like an infinity symbol...
- neverblink0
Your upside-down Vs are leaning to the right.
I agree that the crossbar on the H is kinda throwing your bar-less As off.
I would take the ampersand down a bit, so its middle is aligned with the crossbar on the H and R.- good point all - Ill work on this after my 9-5 today and post something back here later - thanks for the look!identity
- this is the main thing that stood out to me, though I thought it might have been the alcohol.duckseason
- scarabin0
- is this for real??iCanHasQBN
- of course! They take off the eyes on the morgue and put them on bags and throw them out just for fun...Mishga
- nb0
If you're going to use the bar-less "A", you should flip it horizontally.
It's backwards.
- wha...?Invalid
- +1HomeCreative
- it's not.johndiggity
- Yes it is.
nb - it's correct the way it is, nb, wtf?monospaced
- johndiggity0
if you have the display version, i think there is an alternate r that might work well before the ampersand. also with the crossbars removed, the apex of the a's might need to move left just a little.
- Ah! Good call - Im home now, but I know the r you're referring to, I'll give it a shot - thanks!identity
- robotron3k0
instead of two names, what about something like this:
o_O