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- Dancer0
What neverblink said. A needs a redraw.... not an upside down V (if that's waht it is)
- baseline_shift0
move the L and I slightly closer together
- bulletfactory0
my personal preferences aside (and kerning suggestions as well) - don't let design by committee take over. You've tried pretty-much everything everyone suggested without defending your own initial design decisions. If you had explained yourself in the beginning, comments may have gone much differently and you wouldn't have wasted a bunch of time. Tell us what you did and why when asking for a critique (i admit i'm guilty of the same thing sometimes).
- oh, ive just tried some things suggested - and not others - Ill come to a conclusion im happy with, but I just wanted to get...identity
- some "fresh eyes" on this to see something that might be/no be there that I wasn't seeing. In the end, I'll go with what I feel...identity
- comfortable with, but I just wanted to comment on people's suggestions and tell them I appreciate their comments.identity
- SumWurk0
I like your logo as it was. Nice work!
- janne760
if in doubt, use Impact.
- identity0
- Beautiful.thatboyneave
- the & seems small for print,
very well balancedversion3 - "&" is still a bit smallutopian
- text is rather large compared to ampersandjanne76
- laurus0
Reduce spacing between R & T and slightly more between T & H. Increase spacing between J & U a hair.
- janne760
reduce spacing between & and J about one and a half hair...
- monospaced0
the RTH feels loose, and even the first A might be hanging out a hair
- why did you disagree with me about the RT being loose? GAWD.iCanHasQBN
- I disagreed about moving the T left, actually, GAWDmonospaced
- well, if you move the T left, it's relation to the R wouldn't be loose. KAWWW.iCanHasQBN
- d_rek0
It looks OK black on white, but i think you would notice the subtles of the spacial relationships if you reversed it out of black to fine tune the kerning.
All said it has a timeless elegance and sophistication.