Logo Critque
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- janne1
Very nice, Canoe!
I feel the front legs are a bit short, feels a bit T-rex'y. ;)
- spl33nidoru0
I don't mind the legs, it's a stocky look and I like it!
Well done!
- Chimp0
Hey this is looking good! I personally like the overall aesthetic.
What emotions do you want to transmit? Who's your audience?
On a high level I feel the balanced could be improved and the shapes seem to conflict with each other. Could it be more fluid and have more movement in it? It's for a car brand so I'd expect it to be little more dynamic.
Looking closer, some of the details may be lost when it's reproduced in leather or metal. What happened to the Knight's feet?
I would look to simplify it by taking out some of the gaps and the tiny details.
- Hayzilla1
Very nice. I think the legs are a bit thick but I'm just looking for issues. Send it!
- canoe3
Besides the little under the chin whisker/blip, I'm content with this rendition.
Sorry to disappoint the podophilias but I don't see this working with feet and too much nuance.
The question is now - to humpback or to arch back. One looks more aggressive and fills up the space more, the other lets it breath more.
- imbecile1
Is the rider in the horse or is that a female rider riding side saddle to the left? no rider leg visible? back legs are shorter than the front? might be cool if the arm was brought up a bit more to make it perpendicular to the neck line.
- shapesalad2
I don't 'get' the rider and the cut out line that extendes across the horse to end between it's front legs. Visually not making sense.
The angle of the sword is a bit odd feeling. maybe opposite way if you pulled horse back, you'd need to balance by having an arm going back, which would be the one with the sword as other arm holds rains.
There are many tiny details - eye, mouth of horse, detail on horses hooves etc - that are too small. a the logo is scaled down it's all going to be lost. And those details feel at odds with the larger sized elements. Everything should feel uniform in it's scale.
- *As the logo scales down...shapesalad
- You don't get that it's a knight on a horse?canoe
- In a modern Heraldic style?canoe
- Arm going back while charging forward?canoe
- Definitely loses detail at a small size, but for the emblem...canoe
- janne0
a bump for hump
- sarahfailin0
- Keep seeing this as wellduckseason
- The knight looks like a midgetshapesalad