5mins of your time (short film)
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- blessed
48 hours to make a short film this is what I came up with. Please give me your feed back!
- bzsaw0
Great Job...
- moldero0
Great color/audio/cuts/shots, love, love love it.
2 little things, when your subject is moving to/from the cam and your not running a focus puller increase your DOF so he stays in focus, ex- :56 & 1:01. when he goes out of focus it takes the viewer out of being immersed in the story by reminding him hes watching a film through a lens.
another little thing, try to kill the shadows whenever you can ex: 2:07I absolutely loved it though man, Im really looking forward to more
- blessed0
Thanks bzsaw!
- cannonball19780
1:02 persons head in the mirror on top left that probably shouldn't be there. (fyi)
- blessed0
Thanks for the feedback, you are totally right about the focus. You do fee bait lost with him on screen..
How can I kill the shadow is that a job for after effects?
I appreciate the advise!
- blessed0
Well spotted cannonball. I will be fixing it with after effects! After I get the results
- dbloc0
Great. The music overpowers the dialog at times though, making a little hard to follow.
- e-wo0
I agree that the music can take a step or two back across the whole film. Dialogue is paramount.
- blessed0
Dbloc and e-wo I will have a play around after tomorrow!
Thanks for you advice, I can see what you are talking about.