5mins of your time (short film)

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  • moldero0

    Great color/audio/cuts/shots, love, love love it.
    2 little things, when your subject is moving to/from the cam and your not running a focus puller increase your DOF so he stays in focus, ex- :56 & 1:01. when he goes out of focus it takes the viewer out of being immersed in the story by reminding him hes watching a film through a lens.
    another little thing, try to kill the shadows whenever you can ex: 2:07

    I absolutely loved it though man, Im really looking forward to more

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