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- Claymantis
http://soundcloud.com/run-north/…
I changed my link. I'm putting this out here to get more feedback.
Thanks!
- Claymantis0
no takers?
- kingsteven0
loveing the new stuff.
- utopian0
nice
- 74LEO0
no DL?
- Claymantis0
Not right now... Maybe later
- DRIFTMONKEY0
Not bad. Hardware or software?
- Claymantis0
Hardware
- Claymantis0
I only use the computer to arrange the tracks... everything else is pure outboard.
- abettertomorrow0
Good stuff man...but they still feel like sketches. Maybe the next step is to flesh some of these out into three or four minute songs.
- lukus_W20
Firstly, I think what you've done is good - but in the interest of providing criticism, this is what I think;
I see what abettertomorrow is saying. The first track sounds like a backing-track. Could do with a meaty bass and melody. Might work well as film soundtrack music though?
Maybe reduce down what you have (some tracks sound too complicated / messy) - and add in some more heavily contrasting / disruptive layers? Some of the samples sound a bit tinny / uninspiring - but I'm listening on shitty laptop speakers.
What you choose to leave out is as important as what you include. There a bit too much going on at any one time for my tastes. Think about what you want the listener to focus on .. and how you can surprise them and play with expectation.
Maybe a bit more syncopation / craziness re. time signatures could be good .. some tracks seem very 4/4.
Good work though - will look forward to hearing more.
- Claymantis0
Thanks - thats great feed back...
I totally agree with everything...
- Claymantis0
Although I do like short tracks... But to make a track more official.. you should give your listeners the full package.
- Claymantis0
any other listeners?
- rybration0
track 4 sums it up.
- Raybandana0
Sounds amazing, I think. Good work
- Raybandana0
What did you use to make it?
- Claymantis0
MPC 1000, remix 16, micro korg
- Raybandana0
Cool - Can't wait to hear more!
- RGB0
Love this stuff. Would love some downloads.
- Raybandana0
I will make some tracks downloadable soon enough...