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- lukus_W20
Firstly, I think what you've done is good - but in the interest of providing criticism, this is what I think;
I see what abettertomorrow is saying. The first track sounds like a backing-track. Could do with a meaty bass and melody. Might work well as film soundtrack music though?
Maybe reduce down what you have (some tracks sound too complicated / messy) - and add in some more heavily contrasting / disruptive layers? Some of the samples sound a bit tinny / uninspiring - but I'm listening on shitty laptop speakers.
What you choose to leave out is as important as what you include. There a bit too much going on at any one time for my tastes. Think about what you want the listener to focus on .. and how you can surprise them and play with expectation.
Maybe a bit more syncopation / craziness re. time signatures could be good .. some tracks seem very 4/4.
Good work though - will look forward to hearing more.