Trailer feedback/ critic
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- blessed
This is a work in progress, but the question is.. Would this trailer make you want to go on to the website?
Thanks in advance for the feedback
- prophetone0
sorry, not for me. the music isn't connecting and i wanted to hear the people talking; explaining how awesome they are. this did not occur. so, as a result, i became enraged.
- blessed0
Lol!!
- blessed0
enraged!
But at least you wanted to hear what they was talking about! if I can take a positive out of your comment.
Thanks anyway
- arne0
i like the concept of dramatic music to this kind of video but i would recommend not to fade it out. that implies arbitrariness - hard to explain - like the video could go on forever but ends here randomly and slowly. better find an abrupt ending on "who am i" and then leave the url in silence. maybe.
- blessed0
very true! I understand what you mean, I will try that!
Thanks
- pango0
sorry it doesn't do the trick of making me want to see more.
you are giving too little to the audience. i didn't get anything from the video, just shots of stylish young people with words saying that are unique, creative and inspired. No idea what they do and don't really care what they do at this point. nothing interesting is pulling me in.
the black girl shot is funny tho lol "what the hell is this thing over my head?"
you need to show something amazing and interesting. a story perhaps. and not too much. just enough so we want to see the entire story.this video on the other hand makes me really want to run down the street to wherever they are and buy their bread. i can smell and almost taste the bread from watching the video!
- autoflavour0
no
- Horp0
Just seems like a mish-mash of on-trend focus pulling HD video clips through a Canon 5D to me. The lack of any actual compelling content in this trailer tips me off to a greater truth being concealed by the choppy, voiceless technique... namely that there is a lack of actual compelling content to the film. website, whatever its meant to be pushing.
Sorry for sounding harsh, but that's an honest bit of feedback based on my personal response to watching it.