Trailer feedback/ critic
Trailer feedback/ critic
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- pango0
sorry it doesn't do the trick of making me want to see more.
you are giving too little to the audience. i didn't get anything from the video, just shots of stylish young people with words saying that are unique, creative and inspired. No idea what they do and don't really care what they do at this point. nothing interesting is pulling me in.
the black girl shot is funny tho lol "what the hell is this thing over my head?"
you need to show something amazing and interesting. a story perhaps. and not too much. just enough so we want to see the entire story.this video on the other hand makes me really want to run down the street to wherever they are and buy their bread. i can smell and almost taste the bread from watching the video!