Logo Crit 2.5
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- CanHazQBN0
it's great! go with it!
- akrok0
did you try my font suggestion? (from your round 2)
- ali0
- desmo0
You really need to work on your font choice and type setting. All 3 logos seem very mismatched. Again, it seems like you are trying to over design it.
- ali0
The impression I get from the 3 versions are they all appeal to different markets/styles:
1. Classical
2. Modern, minimalist
3. Funky, quirky
- Complexfruit0
Research some more typefaces. Try doing just some nice simple type executions. The 3 concepts you are showing just seem over designed in my opinion.
- stewart0
start with an idea. makes it a lot easier.
- Jimbo820
Keep
It
Simple
Stupid
- Haggerty0
I think you need to think more about what the identity says about the brand / person / service rather than simply trying to combine the shapes made by her name.
Interior design is also too broad a subject to accurately design an identity for, with no knowledge of your clients taste / style / work. There is a huge difference between picking out a wallpaper for a living room and choosing the finish for the lobby of a new office complex.
Now, please don't think I’m trying to show you up, or do a better job (I find posting your own version of someone else’s work, without explanation, arrogant and patronising), I’m simply trying to demonstrate how you could think more about what your client does and how you might reflect that in your designs.
Interior designers design interiors, they arrange, they compose space and objects. With that in mind you could design a system that reflects this, something a little more versatile and dynamic. Again though, I’m not trying to do your work for you, just demonstrating a different way to think about it.
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Tom
- vbid will take over ebay soon i expecthonestly
- just trying to help him think differently about it. i never said this was the actual solution.Haggerty
- try not to take it so seriously, i too made a graphic suggestionhonestly
- V-DIB IS MY FAVE DJ 4VR! WOOO!i_monk
- if her interior design style is ubber-minimal than this direction worksgoldieboy
- dbloc0
1. NO
2. NO
3. NO
- decisionman0
I think if you work on 1, it could be really strong!
- yeeblazer0
dbloc - most of the initial critiques fell under three categories:
Didn't read as VB,
Didn't look like "interior design"
Were overworked, overdesignedthese are what I focused on this round - did I fail? where/how so?
- your B in VB is lowercase, doesn't match type.. and the V is just losthorton