Logo Crit 2.5
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- yeeblazer
Hey guys, hopefully these are improvements -
Recap: Interior Designer, who is starting her own company
Original crit/post: http://www.qbn.com/topics/645016…
dig in.
- dbloc0
1. NO
2. NO
3. NO
- dbloc0
Terrior Design
- decisionman0
I think if you work on 1, it could be really strong!
- yeeblazer0
dbloc - most of the initial critiques fell under three categories:
Didn't read as VB,
Didn't look like "interior design"
Were overworked, overdesignedthese are what I focused on this round - did I fail? where/how so?
- your B in VB is lowercase, doesn't match type.. and the V is just losthorton
- VectorMasked0
I don't get interior design from any of those.
1) reminds me of Prince and some death metal bands.
2) doesn't work. type and iconography are not working together.
3) the complete opposite of what interior design is.
- akrok0
drop the all caps, in her name. AS ITS HARDER TO READ!
- dbloc0
1. Not feeling the icon at all...too rockin for an interior designer
2. Needs to say Virginia B. The icon is not recognizable enough to substitute.
3. I see terrior design.
- goldieboy0
Who's the market she's aiming at... $$ or $$$$?
What's her style... classic, modern etc?
Does she have a website we could look at for some visual ref?- website is to come later - she's just getting started.yeeblazer
- and considering the time im having with the logo, i cant wait to have you guys crit that.yeeblazer
- post-up the samples of her work when you get themgoldieboy
- I think you're taking the crit well blazzer... you'll crack it eventuallygoldieboy
- pinkfloyd0
I do like the logo on your site though.
- watchamakalit0
i don't really like em much..
but if theres no other choice id go for #3
and work on tons of revisions.one is to emphasize the INTERIOR.
- CanHazQBN0
it's great! go with it!
- akrok0
did you try my font suggestion? (from your round 2)
- ali0
Not sure if this would suit her style but what if no1 was a more classic serif style like the rough below so it appears like a structural column in the middle
- desmo0
You really need to work on your font choice and type setting. All 3 logos seem very mismatched. Again, it seems like you are trying to over design it.
