website crit please
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- leftwave
hello,
i'm designing a website for a new plastic surgery center. please have a look and share your feedback, thanks!
- MrNibs0
It's a good start. I like.
My thoughs:
I'm all for padding but this feels a bit freakishly large between columns. I'd rather have the larger image than the gaping void.
I like the texture although I think the dark texture is a bit big and could be scaled down and back a bit. Perhaps it's because the content type is so small in comparison to the texture.
Without the hover state the nav is pretty subdued. (i'm fine with it but client might want more prominence)
Not sure the bottom angle \ line box is needed. Takes away a bit of the top box impact when it gets repeated like that. Although if the address is really important, it certainly calls it out.
I'd also maybe pick another script font. That one not so good.
Cheers.
That's some scary before and after pics!
- Josev0
Im not digging the funeral home wallpaper, maybe others will disagree. The extra space beneath the Ranch&Coast logo seems unnecessary, you could tighten it up a little and move everything up on the screen.
- utopian0
Overall I like the design, the color palette and typography are remindful of a "Coffee House and or a Coffee Roaster" for some reason or another. Josev mentioned tighting up the spacing a liitle bit, I agree. The light beige wallpaper does not align or repeat seamlessly as you widen your browser as well...
- dbloc0
black says death to me...I'd go with more natural tones or light blue or light green to signify the medical field.. IMO
- dbloc0
maybe take some colors from the rendering...
- stoplying0
Take a little out of the hips. Then increase the fullness of the nav bar, and make the cups one size bigger.
- raf0
Three different overlapping patterned background types where should be one, maybe none. What's with the drawing, was it provided by client? It could work in some setting...
I would probably start fresh with something surgically clean with warm colours, unless it would conflict with client's current visual style.