logo crit
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- mattlundstrom0
Significantly extend the line on the left, maybe even until it hits the left hand side of the document / website / biz card. Like it's emerging from the left hand side of a display.
- Reaact0
What is the ball on the end?
- SoulFly0
pretty cool
- nosaj0
I think I would just have the M's in the EKG style... have the rest on the letters live on the flat line.
- maquito0
I think it's very nice! Like it.
- epigraph0
Thanks all, great food for thought here.
Gotta say it's one of the least brutal crits I've seen.
- Tofublock0
I couldn't read the meds part. The D and S could use some work. Maybe a different color? It might help if you mocked them up on some stationary or web site to push your idea more.
- ukit0
- ukit0
Just type out the name in Akzidenz Grotesk
- inkpink0
maybe find some similarities between the EKG and a equalizer or a waveform.
- bjladams0
the angle of the "m" does not match the "thly" - i keep wanting it to line up right
- plash0
I did not get the message of the logo being music themed. in fact at first glance i got out of it that it was some type of prescription medicine program
- Projectile0
it's not too bad a concept but you gotta give it some treatment. I like how the knobs in these images are could almost be found on a mixer....
- blogger0
Try to simplify it more. Let's see it in color.
- brandelec0
can't see music/dj in it at all... initial thought was a prescription co. that's too literal.