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- instrmntl0
it actually looks like hipster art. you could totally do a show for fecal face or smt.
- if you painted in some stick figures and random doodles.instrmntl
- I KNOWWW, i could totally see it grace the pages of them-thangs.com et alPeterPancake
- 74LEO0
Luv splosions!
Try doing film separations of the original then maybe spray paint them and then do an over stencil.
- Something like that would be sweet, but I don't think the composition merits the effort. I'm looking for something with a little less hassle (but no less imaginative value..maybe).PeterPancake
- with? do go on74LEO
- 10g00
I like that it's very early 90's
- d_rek0
I dunno. To critique the image formally there's a lot lacking there. The original is nice. Captures the shatter decently. Compositionally maybe not the most exciting thing.
The photoshop tragedies all just scream of "filter".
I guess it's hard to critique it further without understanding any context for the image. It really just looks like something you'd find on deviantart.
- Like I said, I'm not going for high art. But yeah, filters...PeterPancake
- ernexbcn0
I spent too much time in the interwebs and this is coming from not a designer but the 1st thing that came to my perverted mind was this picture ->
No offense! it's just the first thing that crossed my mind, you professionals can carry on with the discussion I move away now.
- http://www.mafiaen.c…ernexbcn
- haha, everyone's entitled to an opinion. More i look at it the more I think of this: http://tinyurl.com/3…PeterPancake
- awesome showernexbcn
- PeterPancake0
I'd sell him the invert, it's just I want to pass on something with a bit more complexity.
- OSFA0
I hear you, but
'...and it blew his mind, the dudes never even heard of photoshop before'
should not be an excuse and instead, you should show him something good and introduce him to better work (not saying your poster is bad)
- bjladams0
...if he likes it- and is paying for it.... i like the original photo best.
- PeterPancake0
butitsnoisseeyy right
- PeterPancake0
Okay, good words so far. To be honest, it's not that I'm creating something I like, it's more that I want to cater to what my friend wants from the image...
So we started with this...
We started playing with it in photoshop, and I interted it out of curiosity, and it blew his mind, the dudes never even heard of photoshop before.
He liked the concept of hurting global brands/established corperations and also, in the invert, that the water was black, and impure? and I think that it was just generally messing around with his perceptions. As an inverted image is clearly just an inverted image, and some of themes he was extracting are pop art related, I thought I'd try and post process it to pull out that sort of feel.
- pillhead0
too much noise -too much noise -too much noise -too much noise -too much noise -too much noise -too much noise -too much noise -too much noise -too much noise -too much noise -too much noise -too much noise -too much noise -
- NickInfozure0
The label has come out very nicely. I would keep the label as it but build up a layered vector using the colours currently there for the rest of the bottle and the background. Clean it up a bit.
- bigtrick0
too much noise - looks too much like a product of your tools rather than a product of conscious effort. smooth that shit out some.
- d_rek0
Evokes a pretty flatline response from me. Both emotionally and formally. It would have been better if I outright hated it.
- uan0
:/ crap.
- constructive?PeterPancake
- :( man, Id rather go for a superrealistic rendering of the high-speed shot.uan
- instrmntl0
beer pinata = )
- bjladams0
i would like it more if the bottle of bud were removed. the background is better then the foreground.
- < reminds me of that old B-Movie ant film (the little ants that eat everything)....what was it...!!!??sneakybadger
- i think that was a mcgyver episode- the one where he goes to south america...
bjladams - No, was a film... quite psychedelic, 60's/70's.......sneakybadger
- cant say that i know that one... but now i want to go watch mcgyuverbjladams
- lol :) It's really bugging me now....
pun probably intended!sneakybadger - Yep got it... sorry, no body cares about this but me.. erp, anyway!
http://www.youtube.c…sneakybadger - I watched :)PeterPancake
- Yay :)sneakybadger
- epic_rim0
yikes
- acescence0
too noisy
- OSFA0