site crit please
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- leftwave0
which image is better??
- leftwave0
anyone else?
- iheartfun0
I like the first one the second one is to chemical company for me
- MHDC0
Doc looks like Lady Gaga in first rounds
- baseline_shift0
try aligning the nav with the grid system thats going. it doesnt seem 'attached' to anything if you follow my drift.
- the break in your headline is really odd toobaseline_shift
- what exactly do you mean by this?
leftwave - the way the lines of copy break. "We take your" line is way shorter than the one under it. looks odd.baseline_shift
- ah yes, good call. i fixed this now.leftwave
- elDoctor0
Wow some actual feedback! Are QBN'ers growing up?
- seriously? i see good feedback here all the time.baseline_shift
- me too! that's what keeps me coming back :) thanks everyone!leftwave
- hellojeehae0
i like the second version of so do we. I dont think you should increase the size. Bold is enough
- Nightshade0
Second image version is definitely better - looks like the company are more 'hands-on' / take more care.
I think the title text should read:
"You take your medical practice
seriously- so do we"
(move the line-break and change the comma for a dash)Increase the saturation of the coloured nav blocks slightly, without being too over powering. I think they look a bit too dark.
All IMO of course.
- great suggestion about the headline. not sure what i was thinking there!leftwave
- SumWurk0
The girl in the main photo (b&w / upper right) looks rather doped up... quite ironic. Use another picture, please.
- leftwave0
thanks to all of your help, i think i have a nice design to show the client: http://leftwave.com/indevelopmenā¦
:)