Logo Help
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- ********
Does the "W" to "o" connection look odd to anyone? Technically, I'm supposed to drop the line before going back up to the "o". But instead I'm shortcutting it, so I think there's a possibility of it being read "Aolff" or "Uolff" instead of "Wolff". I've been looking at it for too long. Grazie.
- brandelec0
Uolff
- brandelec0
WolH
- version30
looks like a capital U
- version30
Urilff
- brandelec0
you're shortcutting too much.. even the 'ff' don't look right
- vitamins0
Urilff
- ********0
O would drop the link for the W to help it read Wolff.
- ********0
Thanks. Yeah, or maybe I could swing the "W" completely over the "o", so that it's not even touching it. Could make it more prominent.
- ********0
How about this... "ZloeH"? See it?
Ahhhh, back to the drawing board...
- spendogg0
i read wolff - but it took me a few to come to that conclusion
- dyspl0
having the same baseline -at least for WOL- would help
- but i intentionally wanted it to be staggered like that. not sure if that's whats making it illegible.********
- but i intentionally wanted it to be staggered like that. not sure if that's whats making it illegible.
- dyspl0
well it makes the last part of the W looking like an very long junction with the O.
just my 2cent, it might be wrong.
- baseline_shift0
the first and last strokes in the W should line up at the top. This will help it read better.
- really interesting start, though. And i like the soap application.baseline_shift
- thanks! Yeah, I may make the last stroke match the height of the first. thats what i meant about swinging it over the "o".********
- yeah, do that for surevitamins
- doesnotexist0
maybe make the loop in the W more visible? right now it looks awkward in that area abouts. love it though, nice work
- _niko0
make the w unattached .
this is nice
- inkpink0
consider handwriting flow... write it on a piece of paper... you would never connect a cap W with an o.
for a hotel i think you're taking a little too much artistic freedom with the script... unless its an odd boutique hotel.
- ********0
- Typosapien0
Try to join the “ff” like a traditional ligature but separate the crossbars. As for the W, I think you just need to extend the join a bit and bring it lower so it's not to the top of the “o.” That might define it better as an “o” rather than an “a.” Just my 2 cents.
