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- fabricio2k
Hey guys, how are you doing in this sunny Tuesday? At least here in Copenhagen it is :)
Anyway, i got my stuff together on Cargo (yeah, i know...throw me the stones, but I really dont have time, at least now, to design the Flash website I so much wanted) And would love to hear what you guys think :)
(PS: Is the URL too gay? Fabriciolima.com was taken.. and after I registered this one i was like... errr... maybe it stands too much of FAB... )
- chossy0
Mate it is perfect. One tiny thing and I don't know why but the index button for some reason doesn't feel right to me being in the top right!!!!!! it's not nasty or anything just feels wrong.... instead of having index on the top right what about a small grid of the main page to click on the get back would this be nicer in the top right?, or too cryptic.
None of what I said is important, I really think the site is fine nothing wrong with it.
Great work.
- cheers for the feedback mate, i will look into the index thing! :)fabricio2k
- cubanhaze0
Nice Work! I like the VH1 Hands & PSST3 pieces, had seen b4.
Congrats!
- cubanhaze0
Oh You also worked on that JB piece, awesome
- fabricio2k0
Wow Cuban, thank you very much man! Was browsing your works too and its super!
:)
- chossy0
Don't look at the index thing until some other folk comment on it, cause it could totally just be me. I think it was because it took me a while to figure out how to get back, but like I say it's perfectly fine, I'm just slow he he, I do like the layout and going back to the layout on the home page is nice, because you get to look at a good sized thumb of the work and select what jumps out at you, nice portfolio website.
- WeLoveNoise0
some great work in there
way better than the prev version
- trooperbill0
nice bright work, needs your name and number on the page as the contact about menu is hidden in the tiny meny bar... be interesting to see how it grows, if you'll keep the top menu this consise when you start updating it.
- fabricio2k0
Im not sure how I do that.. maybe it goes in the same grid as the logo? But in the complete right side?... im trying to figure this out specificaly. Thanks for pointing that out trooper!
- jimzy0
nice work mate - some cool animation going on there.
so do you really just head off to A N Other country every year?
- fabricio2k0
Yeah, i need to change that text haha.. but yeah, its been like this for the past 6 years :P
- Invalid0
awesome work man! congratz
- baseline_shift0
- Haha, i feel exposed! Yeah man, the logo.. i know what you talking about... i will look into thatfabricio2k
- It took me so long to come up with that.. but people been saying this too.. so maybe i need to just go with plain text i think.fabricio2k
- i wouldnt go plain text. There is some good personality, and it matches your style of work. Try and clean it up a lot.baseline_shift
- OSFA0
Very nice indeed! I likey!
But what does Mike Giesser think???
- fabricio2k0
By the way, the address changed temporarily to cargocollective.com/fabriciolima
I hated my older domain :( putting a new one soon
- bigtrick0
ahhhh i thought fablima.com was awesome! oh well.
- I thought was a bit camp :( im gay.. but i didnt wanted my url to be "Faaab" :)fabricio2k
- its gonna be fabriciolima.tvfabricio2k