i need some feedback
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- satogami0
the font is very tiny, with the verbal language already broken english it would be better to use a font size that is legible to all.
the apt was messy and the lighting was sparce in that place.
the story was first felt hard then it sobered out and felt real.
its like you work hard for your stuff and there is cats out there waiting to take it...
in the end promoting gun violence and rage on here is suck.
your feedback, get a better place to showcase your work and stop promoting gun violence.also the language became understandable english by the middle of the piece and in the end it felt weird to have the translation text in the beginning when in the end it ended with more text but not in translation but in understandable english..
meh...
- dirtylittlesecret0
Thanks for you feedback. But at the end of the day its a great story. This is a designer community. The filmmaker is a great artist at his craft. I feel this is a legit outlet to have creative open minds view the story and comment on it. The film does not promote gun violence as no one gets shot in the film. It is a great script, I hope you can view the 1st episode and view the other 6 after this one to see the story unfold. Which was actually a TRUE STORY at that.
- ok. yur right. in a sense. i do feel it promotes gun violence. n i feel that shouldnt be here.satogami
- i really feel that the woman should have promoted calling the police instead of a gun.satogami
- tha man clearly isw a family man and has no need for such things as guns.satogami
- the story progresses the idea of guns an ok ideal when its not ever!!satogami
- this is what i saw.. and honestly im happy its a creative piece...but...satogami
- in our design forum i think its a lil outside of the norm found here. i can see better forums.satogami
- where your voice can be heard in a healthy environment instead of here.satogami
- not to say your voice is unwanted or anything. welcome here and have fun!!satogami
- my name is jim, i drive an audi and i live in nyc. i see you are in brookland too. hi !!!satogami
- welcome to QBN Feedback™satogami
- thanks Jim. i ride the MTA i live in Brooklyn! the film was shot in Brooklyn. I am a designer i read and follow this forum. check me out. www.dlsnyc.com and bskybrand.com also lookup the Director Gershon Hinkson
dirtylittlesecret - out dlsnyc.combskybrand.com and lookup the director Gershon Hinksondirtylittlesecret