i need some feedback
i need some feedback
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- satogami0
the font is very tiny, with the verbal language already broken english it would be better to use a font size that is legible to all.
the apt was messy and the lighting was sparce in that place.
the story was first felt hard then it sobered out and felt real.
its like you work hard for your stuff and there is cats out there waiting to take it...
in the end promoting gun violence and rage on here is suck.
your feedback, get a better place to showcase your work and stop promoting gun violence.also the language became understandable english by the middle of the piece and in the end it felt weird to have the translation text in the beginning when in the end it ended with more text but not in translation but in understandable english..
meh...