My daughter birthday invitation...
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- luckyorphan0
For what age range is this intended? The text is a little hard to read. But I applaud the effort.
- I'm a sucker for parents doing a lot for their kids.luckyorphan
- ukit0
Drug reference - slightly inappropriate maybe?
- nop, her name is Lucy and she definitly a diamond on my sky :)Elfangio
- lucy in the sky with diamonds wasn't actually a drug reference, it was about a drawing by his son. apparentlymax_prophet
- sure it was ;)pizzafire
- RoyBoyII0
Aesthetic more suited to a nightclub flyer rather than a little girls bday...
In my opinion, redesign...
- spendogg0
does it come with LSD or do you get that at the party?
- inkpink0
i heard they start'em young in portugal
- benfal990
drop the drop shadow on the title and drop the gradient on it too
- Elfangio0
you guys rock!! now for serious please!
By the way, my daughter's name is Lucy
- ...and she is how old? That was a serious question.luckyorphan
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- spendogg0
dont use the destructo script for lucy in the sky. keep it clean like the rest of it it seems out of place. otherwise your are good to go
- scarabin0
if i were to mess around with it the first thing i'd do is drop the "lucy in the sky with diamonds" line altogether, change the background color 'cause to me white looks cheap, and make the relevant information much larger 'cause that's what parent's are actually going to be looking for (as opposed to just talking about what a great artist and hippy the father is)
- Elfangio0
spendogg you're saying you would use the same type as it is in the top ?
- fooler20
it's better than the Sponge Bob invite I got from my niece.
- scarabin0
if it's flyer-sized and you want to keep the art big and clean, you could put the info on the back...
- BonSeff0
i dig it! nevermind the drug talk, i've looked back at the old electric company and sesame streets i used to watch as a lad, and this pales in comparison- haha.. nice job man.. the kiddos will love this invite for sure.
- tparsons0
The big 1 looks like a partial mannequin arm.
What does your daughter like and work around that for the design? Then ask her if she likes it. If the answer is yes you have a winner. If you get a no, redesign and focus more on what she wants out of it.
- marychain0
I like the graphic.
I agree the font at the bottom doesn't work. Use the rounded playful font that you're using everywhere else.also...I have to say it. No matter what meaning the line "Lucy in the sky with diamonds" has for you......it IS a drug reference and may be interpreted by others as such.
- Elfangio0
Thanks guys, nice inputs....
I am doing some shirt out of that illustration to give my wife in her birthday, so I guess i will follow some you give me here...cheers
- scarabin0
oh, that's a "1". i thought that was her arm...
- sothere0
soak the acid into the paper and you got a winner
- and perforate the entire thing into small squareschris_himself
- and feed is slowly to goldfishjteore
- utopian0
Will you be dropping any acid or LSD at this party?