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- utopian0
none of them have a "look and feel" of a gym/sports club...
- detritus0
If the middle one had ..der.. more space in it, i might pursue that kinda direction. Though, is it me (it may well be, I can't see straight today), or are the letter weights all over the place?
Have to say - the current forms, compounded by that colour scheme, all make for some mid 90's Nerf-like consumer toy experience.
- utopian0
i do like the color palette...
- lukus_W0
Is there a concept behind any of the designs?
- i see the concepts...plusminusbox
- what would you say they are?lukus_W
- El_Montr00
Why the parenthesis on the first one?
Hmmm...maybe the 3rd one gives that gym/sports feel, but not quite yet.
- dbloc0
is this the current logo?
- detritus0
The problem with such strong colour schemes is that they already 'say a lot'. To me, that means you can't really do to too much with the logoform - I'd try and develop an overall brand feel, using a modern font in a variety of weights, and perhaps make some kind of graphic detailing to be used in conjunction. imho, of course.
- PonyBoy0
they all look a little 'out of this world' as if you're following the word 'space' and not paying attention to the fact it's a gym... (kind of like everyone else said)...
... i think the fonts are all a bit too soft.
I'd try typing out the word 'space' in every font I could find until one of the fonts said 'look at my body'... then drop all the swooshes and dots... done.
- Amicus0
so it's obviously not a charedi gym :)
- studderine0
as much as everyone thinks these are too focused on space rather than gym, i really like the 3rd option. for some reason, i can see it adorning a gym.
- gabe0
i think your third one is looking too much like the 24 hour logo (though i'm sure it's also derivative of something else). perhaps this is why you can imagine it adorning a gym studderine?
i like the direction of the first one but agree, feels too much like you're emphasizing the idea of "space" as it pertains to the universe
- well ill be damned!studderine
- never saw this logo before, but i see what you meanadded_valium
- version30
- did you create that version3?utopian
- yesversion3
- sell it to him...utopian
- is too sophisticated - otherwise i'd pay dollaradded_valium
- OSFA0
- ukit0
- MrT0
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