CRIT ME!
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- ********0
not to be harsch, but i don't like it.
- harshjanne76
- i don't mean to be harsh. but yes, your previous version is way better. and the name aswell.********
- yeah, thanks for mentioning the name. i lost the name, nothing i can do about it in this situation i am in.janne76
- no, you spelled harsh wrong. that is why i rewrote the word for you.janne76
- janne760
thanks for your opinion, digdre. but you never elaborate on your statement i noticed in a lot of posts.
- janne760
and no, ofcourse you are not harsh, when i ask for a crit i ask for a crit. simple as that.
- ********0
your other site looks more professional.
this just looks dull, empty and amateurish.
the red doesn't look that good on the grayit just doesn't feel right. you can do better
- janne760
okay, i am going to do some self-analysis now.
maybe because of my poor situation i have forced myself to please a too broad market thus becoming stale and meaningless like any other (typical Dutch) stale and soulless "communication agency". and perhaps i should ask myself, should i do that or not.
- ********0
use your other site
and make a new logo.
simple as that. i wish i had a site like that other one
- Corvo20
The structure is there & working fine. All it needs is a bit more of drawing. Not so much "communication" but a bit more craft. Also, at 1024 the main div doesn't leave room for a bg nor fills the screen, which ends up looking weird (not sure potential clients will care about this) or transmitting a feeling of incompleteness.
- janne760
ok, in terms of lack of time it seems better to reuse and reinterpret the old one. i go with digdre's plan.
thanks for the comments!
- mattiaBK0
Nice, and simple, but I think I now understand why you want to quit design! ;-)
- jimbojones0
what was wrong with vormburo? anyway, it's a pain in the ass that you click anything in the flyout menu and it's closed once the page is loaded and you have to click something again. I wouldn't want to cycle through projects like that.
- i took that name********
- who says that is going to happen that way?janne76
- what will happen?jimbojones
- i took that name