Logo Crit
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- utopian0
I like turtles
- pango0
lol i think you need to post the entire brief for the qbn fellow to understand. and your concept as well.
i mean... what exactly is your concept?
what's the name? why turtle?
you need to work on your graphic style cuz without you explaining, i didn't see the turtle nor the smoke...
- jeveritt0
is this for real?
- studderine0
how would it not be real...?
- Projectile0
assuming it is real...
you've decided on ONE concept and gone with it. BAD! in fact we all seem to agree that the concept itself is not brilliant. Get out a sketch pad and draw up at least 20 ideas. One of the will hopefully be really good.
also, the swirls themselves don't look very refined. You need more practice with the pen tool.
Also.. what about the name? that's often more important that the actual logo. Heck, many only HAVE type as a logo. The name might pull our minds away from eating live turtles
- chossy0
If the subject was reptiles I would have done an imbroglio of snakes for a lawyers logo.
- roundabout0
Turtle Soup me also
- Shanna0
before i even read the specs you had for the logo, which are rather ambiguous, i thought 'that turtle has stink lines' ...i suppose if you want to inspire the feeling of food, steam, etc. you should make the lines flow a little smoother... it just doesn't seem very appealing
- gentleman0
also steam is white or gray not green
- chossy0
lewelry company call it 'ortega' and have a snake eating it's own tail = a ring never ending love your tutor will love it and so will the skinny bitches in your class.
- Nairn0
- it's a 4 col process - green, khaki, red, black, with overprinted sections - should come in under budget.Nairn
- hahaha, face looks a bit like kermit7point34
- That is a work of art.... I want it framed and on my wall... Seriously.non
- do you do birthdays on short notice?brandelec
- and mitzvahs too!
..assuming turtles are kosher.Nairn - needs better kerningbaseline_shift
- janne760
LOL!
- version30
so you and the snake guy know each other don't you? how old are you 2?