Logo Critique
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- Knuckleberry0
Reads very Hilton or Holiday Inn
- tOki0
Regardless, I'm being analised by the branding agency who have given us the work and the are ruining everything. Sigh.
I hate these people who presume to tell me how to design when they obviously can't themselves...
- PunchDouble0
i liked the first version *shrugs*
- janne760
- Aye, but I'm sure you or most other QBNers would bring this one out for any vaguely anthropomorphic logo.Nairn
- Looks like a logo for Pido Bearroundabout
- It made me think of this logo also...sorry :(Brainiac
- NONEIS0
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Ich… << the significance.
- forcetwelve0
i like it. think it looks better in solid - no gradients. i also like the h bar going through the two verticals... need to clean up some kinks in your paths - but i'm sure you know that.
- yeah its a mess, i might trace over what I have to reduce/clean up the points.tOki
- e-pill0
tOki awesomeness logo...
good night...
-e
- tOki0
Thanks for all your responses guys, next time I'll make sure to include a jesus fish wanking a person wearing a ribbon bow.
- Brainiac0
The final looks good...but the first one with the head looks like some dude looking down at his wang!
But overall it's a good job IMO.
- version30
- does the serif of the H have to bleed off the page??? i mean all of it is bleeding somewheree-pill
- but does it all have to have bleed?? every part of the H bleeds...e-pill
- i mean its cancer and it spreads... so why make the h so spreading out so much???e-pill
- id confine it a lil more than making it look like the "oca" will get infected too...e-pill
- do you know what i mean???
maybe you dont...e-pill - as a patient of cancer care i want my doctors to be the best... not bleeding all over...e-pill
- the man makes good pointsversion3
- version30
in regards to the ribbon, the only cancer ribbon i know of is pink, for breasts, past that, ribbons shmibbons. ribbon is too cliche for "support" i think it's weak in this application. as a wordmark, i do like though
- this is why i didnt recognise the ribbon i too also see the ribbon in pink or yellow for ware-pill
- tOki0
- flyness!version3
- though i do wish the h stroke passed through the left side if even a bitversion3
- looking good actually. very good chance of a kick ass package.VectorMasked
- rosem0
it totally looks like the guy is looking down at his dong. or he's putting his hand up his ass. it's a nice concept you're working on, but this isn't the solution.
- NONEIS0
The connection to the cancer ribbon is not nearly obvious enough.
Kill the ligature on the O, it will read significantly better.- in fact, it looks more like a Jesus fish to me at first glance...NONEIS
- what is a jesus fish?? he lived in the desert no fish around there... or am i mistaken??e-pill
- its caz im jewish right?!?! this is why i have no idea what you are talking about?!?!e-pill
- what the fuck is a jesus fish???e-pill
- Ichthys
http://www.superchri…version3 - wooahkay,,, but what is it or its significance???e-pill
- e-pill, lots of water near the desert in question. http://en.wikipedia.…NONEIS
- thanks noneis...e-pill
- tOki0
Yeah I was worried the H might be too hard to pick - it still needs work. The last thing we want is a client saying they can't read their own logo and can only think about dick when they see it lol.
I wanted to use a simple word mark with the cancer ribbon inside the O, but they said that was too boring and knocked it back immediately.
- marychain0
I'm sorry, but the comments about the phallic stuff are true.
I saw it right away I'm afraid....it does NOT work.The feel of the letterforms and colors are nice...but you need to do some SERIOUS revision here with H
it's REALLY not working