Check my German
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- pressplay0
it lacks a friendly and appealing tone... sounds very burocratic and ponderously... as the others said: have it rewritten by a native speaker...
- pascii0
Its well translated but poorly written.
- Thanks Im an illustrator not a writer.mapsillustrated
- I'm a lover not a fighter. I have shaved my balls to prove the point.Orbit
- sorry, that wasen't meant to be bitchin'pascii
- you need hairy balls to fight?Corvo2
- gung_hoek0
translation is ok/good, appears professional enough. but the amount of content, as well as its structure, both kinda suck. the same story could be easily told in 25% the space, without sacrificing the message. the layout of the page also could use some attention...
- mapsillustrated0
Thanks gung_hoek. what i need is a writer and designer not a translator.
- gung_hoek0
and one thing, the "unsere leistungen" paragraph needs a fix. the content lacks punctuation as of now; f.ex. like this:
- Beauftragung einer Illustration für den kommerziellen Gebrauch (weitere Hinweise finden Sie auf unserer .com Webseite)
- Nutzung von Zweitrechten
- Kauf einer originalen Illustration
- Erwerb einer maßgefertigten Karte als Geschenk
- mapsillustrated0
Again Thanks! gung hoek. I can see now that it is wrong in that section. where are you based? Germany?
- yep, frankfurtgung_hoek
- Hey Gung, what is the design business like in Frankfurt?mapsillustrated
- mapsillustrated0
Anyone else like to take a look and comment before i make some changes??
- pascii0
i suggest to post the text to a professional german copywriter. as i said before, it isn't well written
- and this isn't meant to be offending. i'm not a wordsmith toopascii
- either :pinvisiblechamber
- ahah.Corvo2
- invisiblechamber0
i have been dealing with this problem before. pure translation won't do it. some native german person has to read, understand and then re-write it in german.
- tomkat0
ich denke dass in diesem bolzen zuwenig deutsch gesprochen wird.
- feuerfuchs ist besser als der zwischennetzerforsch...invisiblechamber
- haha - qbn cannot compute german words in one piece...invisiblechamber
- tomkat0
ööh gewinde, nicht bolzen
- pascii0
Entschuldige, sprechen Sie Marketing? Oder nur heisse Luft?
- tomkat0
ich hoffte jemand würde bolzen bzw gewinde babelfishen und "thread" finden, aber am ende war es doch nur ein anfall von schwachsinn. dada.
:)