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- t_rock0
1,4,5,8 and 9 - the balance between the type and the objects seem off... thickness of circles vs. type. #2 has promise, but again I'd work on the proportions between the type and object. 6 could work, but it doesn't stand out as much. The whole voice bubble thingy has been used so much lately.
- ha funny. everyone is different on wjhat they likeHurley
- Hurley0
work on 2,3 and 9. I like the network cable jack, what else could you do with that? Could make a nice symbol if stylized.
- VectorMasked0
1 or 5. 6 and 7 needs lots more work.
The joint capitals "V-D" doesn't work too well. #5 shows conflicts with the round and the sharp.
- Hurley0
try to create a network jack out of whitespace like the FEDEX arrow
- irrelevant0
OH SNAP, I never saw the arrow until now.. haha.. I have seen the logo a bajillion times too. It's almost like those sterogram pictures which I still can't see
- BuddhaHat0
I'd like to see the speech bubble off number 1 with the lettering from number 5.
The Cat 5 connector is interesting, but given the ends are transparent, perhaps hollow out the D in #9?
- ukit0
The blue color, bubble and grey in 1 and 5 instantly made me think of the Real Networks logo. Might want to make sure you don't go too close to that.
- WeLoveNoise0
2, 5, 8
5 is prob the best but wud word on the type more cos doesnt look right rounded- some nice samples tho
always look forward to ur logo crits despite the shit u get 99%WeLoveNoise
- some nice samples tho
- scarabin_net0
1 and 5
9 is going to look outdated
- WeLoveNoise0
infact i like 8 more
5 is good because its prob what client wants, but it is really just a trend, where as 8 will stand the test of time
- VectorMasked0
#8 will stand the test of time?
It barely means something. It looks so random. You can look at it and get no meaning at all out of it.- looks like a computer chip which i would assume is relavent to networksWeLoveNoise
- doesn't look like a chip. looks like a handful of boxes randomly merged together. it lacks the strength to be a logo.VectorMasked
- It looks like a Cat5 cable, which isn't even necessary a good thing if they sell wireless. And not all pick it as a cable anyway.BuddhaHat
- i disagree - looks like a chipWeLoveNoise
- jimbojones0
try to get away from the idea of V and D sticking together, it doesn't work. speach bubbles and network jacks for a communication company? if they idea is so blatant, the execution has to be top notch.
- studderine0
im not feeling the VD
- studderine0
vaginal disease, sorry i had to do it.
- coco_ono0
2 and 3 are my pick. work with the balance for 2 though.
- shitehawke0
2, 3 & 6 are my preference.
I think the type is too dominant in 2 though, the balance between type and mark is a little off but with a bit of tweaking could be a very simple mark. I like how unfussy it is (as opposed to 8 & 9). I also think that a more abstract route is better. Anything that relies on cables etc is going to get out dated pretty quickly. A Cat 5 cable could be the best at the moment but wireless could be the way forward in technology then the mark is based on obsolete technology.I like 3 but I don't really know why (I know that doesn't help) but I like the blue triangle and Im thinking it represents the speech bubble, just not sure how at the moment. Did you try it beneath the 'VDI' to make that an abstracted speech bubble instead of actually illustrating a bubble?
I like 6 but probably the least of the others, simple, references communications but it isn't very unique at the moment. It needs something else.
Also of all the ligatures I prefer that of number 2, I think in 3 & 6 the space is needed between the v and d, even if its just a notch. Actually you could try a more cubic blocky font and use a small notch between the v & d to hint at the whole speech bubble thingy or bring the bottom of the v down to a sharp point and theres the angle of the speech bubble.
For some reason I keep typing 'speach' first then changing it to 'speech'. Im now not even sure which is correct but I can't be arsed checking.
- monospaced0
venerial disease
- irrelevant0
Guys, I really appreciate the feedback. Will definitely integrate a few of the suggestions.
- d_rek0
#2 for me - I like the type. I feel like the rest of them lack balance / something that makes them unique. Unfortunately the whole dialogue bubble is getting way played out. Maybe there's something you can do with that shape to make it unique / theirs / etc?