Design Crit
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- breadlegz0
like them a LOT. however, the S (i think its an S) on ALIAS is a bit hard to read. maybe just needs slight indents into it.
- you make a good pointimnotadesigner
- i try my bestbreadlegz
- WhiteFace0
1 and 3 are the best IMO
- NEWSFLASH0
^ i have to agree, 1 + 3
leaning towards 3
- FallowDeer0
id say 3
- imnotadesigner0
fixing the s now
- Godhaal0
1
- uan0
3, maybe adjusting the font color a bit to match the light color.
- DesignedbyDave0
3, but...
I would maybe spend a little longer on the typography of 'mash-up, r&b etc' and also align them with the left edge of the main type as they seem to be indented a bit too far to the right for my eye.
Looks good though, seems like a nice template that would work in loads of colours and with various images, nice job!
- I slacked a little on that I knowimnotadesigner
- any font suggestions for the 'mash-up, r&b etc' ?imnotadesigner
- Something a little heavier maybe, or a slab like lubalin?DesignedbyDave
- ahh yes, or maybe rockwellimnotadesigner
- robotron3k0
3 & 7 keep it sexy as possible.
- haffeera0
I would say 1
- Latvian_lovin0
lovin 3 and 7...
- fodcj0
Really like 1, 7, 8, 13, 14
- uncle_helv0
Rybo???
- juhls0
3, 4 (because you can see the guy looking at her), 7
I love 1, but just as a photograph.
- dMullins0
3!
- d_rek0
the first 10
- d_rek0
but seriously,
I think the type competes with image in all of these... maybe create a stronger heirarchy between the two (Ie: dominant type, recessed image or dominant image, recessed type).I think the ones with images are more successful than the ones without. The purely typographic ones need some work... they're fairly neutral even though your typography suggests otherwise. I would explore some color.
- I feel like the type only versions would stand out when most other people are using color and photographs.monospaced