My new portfolio site
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- braaad
My turn! I'd love to hear any feedback you may have: http://www.bradeller.com/new/
- vaxorcist0
nice look/feel
NOTE: For some reason, on Vista/Chrome, the text is layered on top of itself twice in the "work" section... maybe just my browser?
- WeLoveNoise0
the site doesnt really cry out graphic designer with 5 years experience
- I agree. I think the portfolio pieces need to be reordered opposite of what you have now. The ones later in the slide show are stronger then the first few.ambermiro
- doesnotexist0
kinda empty
- Complexfruit0
It's straight forward and easy to navigate. One thing I noticed is the placement of the left and right arrows seemed a little off. Also I'd like to see a little emphasis on "Client:" "Project:" and "Role:" to separate them a little.
And bolding the first letters of your name kind of bothers me.
- WeLoveNoise0
would change ur logo cos the 2 weights dont work well
and u have a next arrow button on your identity section but theres only 1 piece in there- never a great idea to put a massive photo of yourself on eitherWeLoveNoise
- fyoucher10
Forget to embed font? Right now for the body copy of your folio projects, it looks like it's at Times New Roman.
Also, you've got some major bugs going on. If I click from one section to another (like from interactive to print), the copy from each of the sections overlap each other (real bad)
- rosem0
The animations are a little boring, either just simple tweens, or nonexistent. If I click a new section, the area just goes blank until the new content loads in... no transitions, etc...
I know you probably already thought of this, but I would just build this with jQuery. There isn't really anything you're doing that can't be done with it.
Overall it seems plain, very little detail work. It's simple, but not good simple.
- Jamal_Jenkins0
dark, i like dark
- baseline_shift0
I dig it. It would feel a little cleaner/more organized if you only used 1 typeface for the header/nav section. I like both faces, but the logotype for your name seems a little out of place.
Is there only 1 piece in the identity section? this is a little odd, cause i keep clicking on that arrow.
Real solid start.
- baseline_shift0
also, you should embed the type in the work section like you do in the about/contact section.
- monNom0
I like the curvey lines on the cover. those are sweet
- twokids0
presentation is ok, generally easy to navigate and professional
but the work itself needs work, as others have said. reorder it, do some closeups of things....they are all sized too small....
plus, sorry but your copy is irritating...doesn't come off as funny, just irritating.
- braaad0
This is great feedback guys- I really appreciate the honesty and detail. I'm going to refine and post a revision in the next few days. Thanks!
- uberdesigner0
why the hell would someone want to hire you? you're moving to Guatemala
- That is why we are in the HULH Bros Crew, comments like that.Hurley
- Hurley0
great work B
- magnifcent_run0
Gross and the resume links is broken.
- letterhead0
I dislike the bolding on your name. The first letter. not good.