Logo Crit Please
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- MondoMorphic0
Btw, this are a rough, initial pass at logo designs, so please be merciful! :)
- MondoMorphic0
- Do you increase the boob sizes of your friends (above)ukit
- airey0
what else you got?
- mg330
This seems like something Lloyd would do, would actually spend the time on, and put in a thread as a joke.
That said, I believe you and think you need to make it sexier. Variable stroke thickness like Hurley said is a great suggestion.
- hellogoodbye0
Just off the top of my head; might not even work but...do you see that shape the skin tone of the face (only face, not neck) makes? Maybe that could that form into a heart. Plus, I would kill the literal pictogram and go abstract.
- mg330
Oh, and I think the image kind of loses the point. I'd expect to see something more of the full height of two people kind of interlocked.
- ukit0
The illustration (bottom ones) is pretty good, and could work with better type.
Another option: two people making out but done in a simple iconic style.
- airey0
also, stay away from images of people. the search engine (if it took off) will want to be used by dudes looking for chicks, chicks looking for dudes, dudes looking for dudes, chicks looking for chicks, catholic priests looking for alter boys. you get the idea. it needs to be broad to encompass the possible audience.
- ukit0
"catholic priests looking for alter boys"
Don't worry airey, your demographic will be represented
- I doubt it.MrOneHundred
- nom nomairey
- hahatOki
- altar.....boystwokids
- marcostill0
The bottom 2 are the most creative by far. The top 2 are pretty generic and poorly crafted. I would explore the bottom idea a bit further as you have a good idea, but the execution is lacking.
- twokids0
the top two look like something for the heart association. you expect to be hit up for a donation.
the bottom two are more on target but too detailed. if you simplify, as others have suggested, you could even get away with the two people kissing as gay or straight....
- 7point340
as an illustration or iconographic design 1C and D are great, but ultimately not very logo ish
top 2 aren't strong enough as a mark in my opinion
- blackisle0
"They are a search engine of makeout spots and they're targeting a younger crowd."
Are they doubling as a dogging site
- 23kon0
if its for a young audience why not create a web2.0 or iphone/apple style icon using the classic candlestick icon (above).
take the illusion into the new millennium
- hektor9110
I think the first one, however I think it needs more elaboration
It needs to be sexier like someone here said!
- airey0
let's call a spade a fucking digging tool and be honest. they're plainly shit. we've all been there and when you start a new logo you'll create shit. you've got those concepts out of your head and now you have to hit the mouse and come up with some more.
you can't polish a turd. granted you can roll it in glitter but it's obviously still a turd.
i could be wrong.
- version30
refine 1a, lose the text for now
- version30
maybe retool the heart appeal into a set of lips
burning lips instead of burning heart