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- adamrobertson0
Previous and Next links are overrated. Just stack things vertically. Also, is this merely a portfolio or do you do freelance regularly? If the former, I'd loose the logo all together. Branding a portfolio pisses me right off. Otherwise, really nice work.
- Both, really. Im starting a job hunt soon, but I do freelance semi-regularly. (And Im pushing to do more.)baseline_shift
- oh, and thanks!baseline_shift
- SillyBilly0
I like Cargofolio template much better than the Indexhibit template.
- gabe0
excellent work in your portfolio!
- monNom0
Seems to be down....
- baseline_shift0
Worked in some suggestions. Lightened it a bit, simplified some type, etc. Tried to make the thumbs more 'enticing'....
Thoughts?
http://www.stuartdwade.commight try and fine tune the logo over the weekend.
- much better now ;)Mau
- cheers. thnx for the inputbaseline_shift
- doesnotexist0
color
- VectorMasked0
Good work first of all.
Now... it drives me insane that I can't see any colour. It's kinda uninviting. Makes me feel like the brightness of my monitor is screwed up. It's a lil of a let down that I can't see any previews of the colour palettes used for each piece.
The other thing is that the actual work is way way better as a whole then the thumbnails. The way they are cropped is not that great imo.
my 2 ameros...
- I agree with all except the crops, I think the crops are done quite well.adamrobertson
- Im really going for a neutral look, because my work is often driven by color. I like the contrast between the two. maybe its too sparse, thoughbaseline_shift
- sparse though... i'll look at some different options.baseline_shift
- marychain0
great work...solid site
- baseline_shift0
- why is it i struggle so much with branding myself when im supposed to be able to do it professionally... *sighbaseline_shift
- utopian0
nice portfolio
- monospaced0
make the logo smaller
this is probably the last time you'll hear this in a long time